Dangerous Young Women - July 15th, 2012, 4:01 pm
Average rating: 5.00
Okay, so I MAY have overdone the screentones, here.
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Whoa, screentone abuse. [Posted by General Paddle on July 15th, 2012, 4:04 pm]

Can you guess which series the middle panel pays homage to? Sketch prize for the lucky guesser!

Anyway.... got a little overexcited about the screentones, here. Don't worry, they were just for emphasis -- we'll be right back to squeaky clean B&W after these messages. ( o)<



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[Posted by AngelsMelodie on July 15th, 2012, 4:16 pm]

Wow, I love ur art style soo much it's amazing =)) The screentones were a nice touch



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 15th, 2012, 4:40 pm]

@AngelsMelodie:

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you like them.



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[Posted by Komapsunida on July 15th, 2012, 4:44 pm]

Dangerous, but damn fashion babys! Look at that style!!
Hehe seriously though I love the dynamics and the imaginative poses~ and again I'd say the pacing is perfect^^ Its important to establish things ^w^



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 15th, 2012, 4:47 pm]

@Komapsunida:

Thanks! I'm honestly concerned about the pacing of this chapter... it evens out once all the introductory stuff's finished, of course, but I'm worried I'm pushing too much info on everyone too soon. ( x)>



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[Posted by Komapsunida on July 15th, 2012, 5:00 pm]

@General Paddle: Nah^^ Besides even if that were an issue which it isn't, people will appreciate it later as your narrative branches out ^w^



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[Posted by shreego on July 15th, 2012, 10:57 pm]

Pretty smiles and innocent faces to the unsuspecting victims of their malice.



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 15th, 2012, 11:01 pm]

@shreego: I feel like I just missed a reference to an awesome song or something.



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[Posted by shreego on July 16th, 2012, 1:05 am]

@General Paddle: If it is, that would awesome. But no. I just came up with it.



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[Posted by Roboninks on July 16th, 2012, 8:59 pm]

I always get so excited when you update XD



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 16th, 2012, 9:00 pm]

@Roboninks:

Aw, thanks! I'll try my best to keep y'all looking forward.



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[Posted by Elaienar on July 21st, 2012, 12:20 am]

The middle panel reminds me of Pride from Fullmetal Alchemist (shadow powers are the best I like shadows). Also wow I love this page. The details are amazing and the angles and tones you used give it a creepy, frightening atmosphere.



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 21st, 2012, 12:21 am]

@Elaienar:

Ahh, so close! Not FMA, but a certain manga mentions FMA in its English publisher's recommendations for fans of said manga...

Anyway, thanks! I figured I'd try something new for this one.



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[Posted by Elaienar on July 21st, 2012, 9:24 am]

@General Paddle: Hmmm well I'm stumped! I don't spend enough time reading manga these days ... too busy browsing tumblr haha.



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[Posted by Whitespirit on July 22nd, 2012, 5:54 am]

Hmm a bad guess but I'm gonna say full metal alchemist? XD ahaha
Ohhh Witches?!



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 22nd, 2012, 5:55 am]

@Whitespirit:

Someone else just referenced FMA, not quite! Buuut the series I AM paying homage to DOES involve witches...



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[Posted by Yangyexin on July 24th, 2012, 11:09 am]

FINALLY it's not the guys who are dangerous eue



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[Posted by Loki-kamisama on July 24th, 2012, 11:15 am]

Such an exciting story! Love the way you place panels and agree - the pace is perfect)
Hm...just a guess, but the middle panel reminded me a bit of Beatrice from Umineko no naku koro ni)



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 24th, 2012, 4:36 pm]

@Yangyexin:

I thought I'd mix it up a bit. :3c



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[Posted by General Paddle on July 24th, 2012, 4:36 pm]

@Loki-kamisama:

Not quite, but thanks for your guess! Also, I'm glad you're enjoying yourself. :3c



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[Posted by Kannamaru on August 8th, 2012, 4:00 pm]

I like the screen tones!



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[Posted by General Paddle on August 8th, 2012, 5:14 pm]

@Kannamaru: Thanks! I was afraid I'd gone a li'l overboard.



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[Posted by Strawberry (Guest) on March 3rd, 2013, 7:25 am]

mmmm..probably a bad guess and irrelevant now but Soul Eater? Thought it looked a bit like Medusa >.<



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[Posted by General Paddle on March 6th, 2013, 7:11 pm]

@Strawberry: Haha, not too bad! Most people who enjoy the series I was alluding to also enjoy Soul Eater. Good try, Strawberry!


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